24 Mei 2011

The Independence Day




We are as an Indonesian always celebrate Independence Day on August 17th . There are some wonderful events in celebrating Independence Day in my country. From children until the eldest also celebrate Independence Day. This as a form of gratitude and proud to the heroes who have fought.

In the morning, we start to national ceremony. Everyone follow national ceremony. Maybe in their school, office, or in housing. Moment that the most eagerly awaited is flying “Sang Merah Putih”. It feels proud to see it fly.

At noon, there are many interesting games is held in that day. Everyone is racing to get a champion. Games are held such as race eating crackers, run using sacks, brisk while biting spoon in contents marbles and climb areca tree that already grease with oil. There are still many games, but I can not mention it one by one.

Beside games, many parades also held in Independence Day. Usually they walk and wear clothes from all regions in Indonesia. They sing national and region’s song. Most are students who follow the parade.

Those are interesting events when celebrate Independence Day in my country. We are proud as an Indonesian. We never forget with all services of the heroes. We will continue to build Indonesia for more advanced.

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12 komentar:

  1. zhy_apriani24 Mei 2011 pukul 15.06

    Everyone follow national ceremony = Everyone follows national ceremony.

    BalasHapus
  2. Indah Shintia Masniari24 Mei 2011 pukul 15.22

    In paragraph 4 line 1 "many parades also held in" it should be "many parades are also held in"

    Keep writing Min :)

    BalasHapus
  3. H.A.N.Y.A _A.K.U24 Mei 2011 pukul 16.33

    Good writing Jasmine !!!
    i think at the beginning of your first paragraph, it's better for you to change that one.
    May be like this :
    As an Indonesian . . .
    You do not have to put "we are"

    BalasHapus
  4. Sri Indah Rahmiati24 Mei 2011 pukul 16.38

    Nice to read.in the second paragraph, line 2. You should write "follows"

    BalasHapus
  5. cardova efendi24 Mei 2011 pukul 16.57

    M.E.R.D.E.K.A.......

    BalasHapus
  6. Anisha. N24 Mei 2011 pukul 21.04

    our lecturer has ever said, until just for time...

    BalasHapus
  7. @restireiii25 Mei 2011 pukul 08.35

    Komentar ini telah dihapus oleh pengarang.

    BalasHapus
  8. @restireiii25 Mei 2011 pukul 08.36

    do not forget to put some photos mbak :D

    BalasHapus
  9. Vinny25 Mei 2011 pukul 21.38

    here are some wonderful events in celebrating Independence Day in my country..

    you should write => here are some wonderful events in celebrate an Independence Day in my country

    BalasHapus
  10. elizafadhliah25 Mei 2011 pukul 22.03

    hmm...this event remind me at unique competition in my childhood

    BalasHapus
  11. Defrian Anhas25 Mei 2011 pukul 22.31

    i always like as race eating crackers.

    BalasHapus
  12. You D Yuliandra27 Mei 2011 pukul 22.54

    i like racing crackers too

    BalasHapus

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